Welcome back to my blog I have been working on my persuasive argument,why junk food should not be allowed hope you like it.
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Wednesday, August 25, 2021
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Hi Lewys,
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of writing. You have stated your views well in your opening sentence. I can see you have used some of the sentence types that we talked about in the workshop yesterday. I would love to see you add a rhetorical question, one more idea that you could expand on and a summary/ending.
Keep up the good work Lewys!
Mrs Bryce